Such an intriguing story deserves at least one review. I simply loved it. The first thing that came to mind was that it was nice reading a story about the who group, and not just about a few characters. This show really was about the dynamics of the group as a whole, how each one complimented the other. So in this sense, this story pulled it off very well. I loved the interactions with each member, especially in each ones reactions to van Helsing. He was a very intriguing character. I could actually see this happening over the course of several episodes had the series been continued. If I read it right, it looked like Lee was trying to join the Edenites, at least as a guide for a while. That was nice. I'd love to see a sequel to this, or even. Few short durables. That's another thing I liked about your story; it had these little episodes scattered throughout, showing little glimpses of their everyday lives. You're really pulled into the story. Overall, great job.